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Losing it by mayday-daywalker Losing it by mayday-daywalker
Somewhat based on the song by Never Shout Never.
I really don't know what to say about this. Is it self explanatory? Ne? AH WELL.

I had several versions of this and I was having trouble deciding which to use. I still feel like there is something missing. But I wanted to keep it simple...Also I'm testing out different coloring styles. Let me know what you think ^o^

Critique please~
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Critique by MissStory Nov 23, 2012, 9:57:33 PM
Now this is a theme. A really sad one. I cried when I saw this, because I, and I'm sure others, can relate to this.
What I really like here, is the background texture you used, it really adds more to the character. And especially how you had the string drag out a little and revealed it.
The shadowing as well really adds to the depression, like she's gonna sink into the floor.
The pose obviously fits the theme as well.
However, I think what would emphasize more on this theme are the following:
-Have the image itself darker
-If the girl either dressed in a little more black or had scars and bruises on her she'd look more convincing in the picture.
-Maybe have her hold a knife or have one equipped.
The proportion and such is well done. I really like the blurs you textured with and this is quite a piece. One that fellow teens can really understand and relate to.
Keep up the good work! Hope this helps :)
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Haddonfielder Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Beautiful coloring style, I really like it ! :dummy:
And the picture looks really pretty, when it's simply ! c'': <3
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :'D
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Haddonfielder Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
You're really welcome ! :aww:
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MissStory Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Sorry if my critiques are annoying XD
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually whenever I have the critiques option open, you're usually the only one to critique, so I look forward to them XD
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CarlyChannel Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Kinda reminds me of the Just be friends music vid by Luka
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't think I've heard that one. I'll need to give it a listen somtime :'D
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MissStory Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME CRY MARISA
WHY ;w;
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
eue
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Dhanica02 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool
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