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Losing it by mayday-daywalker Losing it by mayday-daywalker
Somewhat based on the song by Never Shout Never.
I really don't know what to say about this. Is it self explanatory? Ne? AH WELL.

I had several versions of this and I was having trouble deciding which to use. I still feel like there is something missing. But I wanted to keep it simple...Also I'm testing out different coloring styles. Let me know what you think ^o^

Critique please~
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Critique by MissStory Nov 23, 2012, 9:57:33 PM
Now this is a theme. A really sad one. I cried when I saw this, because I, and I'm sure others, can relate to this.
What I really like here, is the background texture you used, it really adds more to the character. And especially how you had the string drag out a little and revealed it.
The shadowing as well really adds to the depression, like she's gonna sink into the floor.
The pose obviously fits the theme as well.
However, I think what would emphasize more on this theme are the following:
-Have the image itself darker
-If the girl either dressed in a little more black or had scars and bruises on her she'd look more convincing in the picture.
-Maybe have her hold a knife or have one equipped.
The proportion and such is well done. I really like the blurs you textured with and this is quite a piece. One that fellow teens can really understand and relate to.
Keep up the good work! Hope this helps :)
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thehappypickle Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
I don't get it
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:iconmayday-daywalker:
mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
it's the red thread of fate that connects you to your soul mate but the other person cut it and left her alone
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thehappypickle Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
That is really sad
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Haddonfielder Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful coloring style, I really like it ! :dummy:
And the picture looks really pretty, when it's simply ! c'': <3
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :'D
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Haddonfielder Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're really welcome ! :aww:
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MissStory Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Sorry if my critiques are annoying XD
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually whenever I have the critiques option open, you're usually the only one to critique, so I look forward to them XD
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CarlyChannel Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Kinda reminds me of the Just be friends music vid by Luka
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:iconmayday-daywalker:
mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't think I've heard that one. I'll need to give it a listen somtime :'D
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MissStory Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
WHY DID YOU MAKE ME CRY MARISA
WHY ;w;
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mayday-daywalker Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
eue
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Dhanica02 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool
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